roses are red

• Artist: x-esikaj-x
• Description: it's kinda funny, odd, cute. i hope u like it. ^__^
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: dead roses sugar

roses are red
violets are blue
sugar is sweet and so are you
but wait
the roses are wilting
the violets are dead
the sugar bowl is empty
and so is your head

Comments

[Starstrucked Star]

lol...nice

[justamanda325]

lol, i like the twist at the end! its very good

[Paradox Polka-Dots]

ah! haha, I officially admire you biggrin

[Paper Crane Kiko]

LMAO! its cute i would totally use this to x-plain suptin to a guy i kno! ^_^ kudos!

[x-esikaj-x]

thanks for the comments~!
i actully used this at school, we had to wirte 3 'roses are red' poems. xD

[jewel_14]

lol nice u took the most traditional love poem in the book and killed the cheesyness of it!! Congrats!! xp