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When we speak there is happiness
sprouting through,but..
there is always the sting of sadness
that threatens to bring tears
to these brown orbs of emotion
Remembering the past...
Your other half makes me feel
protected and happy,but not like
you did...the special spark that
was there has faded from you
and from me too..
- Title: Miss You
- Artist: Kynsa
- Description: Something I wrote for someone I cared for
- Date: 07/19/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- selene_queen_of_a_lost - 01/03/2009
- wow i kno how that feels my spark faded too i wish those brown orbs of emotions will come back so i can feel something but wow i can tell u really do care for that person i hope every thing works out for u
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- Seras_Victoria12485 - 12/22/2008
- It seems "Brown orbs of emotion" catches everyone, but I am not talking about that, I am commenting on how it's written. It's good, maybe a little rework, but good.
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- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 07/19/2008
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I really like this.
And l like the "Brown orbs of emotion" thing too. ^ ^ - Report As Spam
- Paperworm - 07/19/2008
- =O Brown Orbs of Emotion... very good. I like it.
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