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• Artist: deathsent
• Description: I'm going to make this one up as i go and I'll tell you truthfully how long it took me its now 9:35 and you tell me if you like it or not okay thanks! its now 9:46 am when I finished!
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: poem

Theres a place in my mind
Where not a soul can cry
Where faeries dance
and angels fly
dragons tell stories
minds are at rest
there are no worries
No one knows of war and death
not a single child has to hold a breath
no horrors linger here
for there is nothing to fear
this place may seem out of sight
but I'm sure if you closed your eyes
it would come easier at night
you may say I'm running from reality
but what I see is immoral and unbearable
so I choose to live my life in my sleep.

Comments

[rosemidnight17]

i really like this one. but it needs a title worthy of it!!!!!!!! i have found nothing wrong with it. im watching you! 5 stars.

[ChristOurSavior-LovesUs]

I love it even though most of the time I dont seem to have dreams(Weird)

[Xx-Mystra-xX]

its a pretty nice poem you got
here that u made in under 11 minutes smile
i like the way u described and compare words
really nice
5*