Poem

• Artist: 0Zero0EXE
• Description: Just a basic poem
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: poem

Darkness consumes,
Darkness obtains,
The reason why we are in tombs.
Or stuck in the rain.
Another soul like me.
All captured, none are free.
Your work touches me.
Stuck in the darkness,
No chance to flee.
The truth is i admire you,
You have lit my flame anew.
And the only thing I can give you.
Is a good luck, and a thank you

Comments

[Rachmaster67]

I liked it, and rhyme all you want it's your poem, not his/hers.

[0Zero0EXE]

I just wrote this few days after my Grandpa died in early march...

[RefinneJ13]

hey nice poem i like i what gave u the idea??????

[xRingAroundTheAmbulance]

It was pretty good. But you don't have to make every line rhyme with the one above. You can have words rhyme, but make sure they make sense. 4/5.