My Bright Moon

• Artist: Trapped_in_ice
• Description: I don't know what else to say. The poem says it all. I just hope you like it as much as I do.
• Date: 07/21/2008
• Tags: love

As you lie sound asleep tonight
I hope you realize everything will be alright.
Though it may not happen as soon as you’d like,
Our bond shall remain forever tight.
As I lie under this beautiful moon
I dream about the moment I will see you soon.
And I know you stare at the bright moon too . . .
Oh baby if you only knew
How much I love you, it’s true.

Comments

[Its_a_Kiki_thing]

i think it is a beautiful peice of poetry about love 4/5

[Atheshya]

The concept of this poem is not particurally origional, but it's done pretty well, considering. I like the rhyming of 'tonight' and 'alright'... it's always good when you can get longer words to rhyme.

[reapersuns manfriend]

The last 2 lines seemed forced. The rest of it was enjoyable though.