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So confused
And in such pain
I feel so used
My heart feels slain
I feel defeated
My soul feels done
My lifes depleted
All hope is gone
The promises I made
I will try to keep
But my heart's in shade
From the building, I may leap
- by metalheadmilo |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/24/2008 |
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- Title: Heartbroke
- Artist: metalheadmilo
- Description: another poem...I actually think this ones a bit better...I wrote it just last night for my ex...I love you Becky...
- Date: 07/24/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- luvgurl15 - 07/08/2009
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kute!!......love it...
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- Pinuyu - 12/30/2008
- i really like your poem!
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- Magnizum01 - 12/12/2008
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Damn kinda harsh but gud luck in life
I'll give this peace a 4/5 - Report As Spam
- metalheadmilo - 07/24/2008
- thx...
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- Mr_Ice 2707 - 07/24/2008
- it is good 5 stars
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- iNeenee - 07/24/2008
- oh im terrible sorry for that. =( i feel your pain through this poem. hope you find someone that makes you happy. its really good, no lie. i give it a 4 star.
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