Breaking Point

• Artist: LIFE_MASTER_182
• Description: Your love is life,
  which I am without.
  Your time is power,
  and I don’t compare.
  This is the breaking point,
  and I really have to draw this line.
  This is what makes me,
  and without you this is nothing.
  
• Date: 07/29/2008
• Tags:

biggrin biggrin hope u all like it i write like this a lot so this is only one of my poems

Comments

[chibi guy3]

very well done!

[KoolBeansBabee]

lol, you wrote your poem in the wrong place.. you need 2 switch the description and your poem. But it is a very nice, descent poem. It could be a little more flowly.. but that is just my opinion. It has a very good, and understandable meaning. So i give you 4 stars :]

[reapersuns manfriend]

I think you got the description and place for the poem mixed up...