Vampires

• Artist: Leshaya_Deserai
• Description: a poem about my beliefs about vamps (sometimes)
• Date: 07/30/2008
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Locked away during the light,
only go out when it is dark.

Hiding, watching, waiting...

Darkness falls.

Time to come out.

Hunting. Prey on the weak, let the strong pass.
BLOOD.LIFE. It keeps you going, thats why we need it.
Here comes the light, time to go find darkness.

Burns barley avoided. All is well.

Another day has begun, the only change from the previous one was the absence of one small girl only noticed by her family and a few friends.

No one else cared.

She was gone, big deal. Those are the ones we choose.

The sun is setting.
Night is coming,
another victim has been chosen.

Comments

[Dancing Armadillo Mage]

The line "BLOOD.LIFE. It keeps you going that's why we need it" ends weakly. I think you need something more powerful to follow the all capped words. I think the caps is cool technique though.