i cry

• Artist: Love_Lane951
• Description: again self explanitory
• Date: 08/18/2008
• Tags: love

my love for you,
could fill a feild or two,
but when we fight,
I cry though the night,
and in my pain and sarrow,
I know you'll be there tommarro,
to hug me and ley me know,
that you will always love me so.

Comments

[D3a7h_G0d]

So did you, the person below me...
Way to ruin this piece, once again, person below me.

On a more serious note, it's quiet the poem. ^^
I like it very much, so you get a five.
I like the first two verses the most, and than the last three.
It'd do you good to correct 'ley' to 'let', and than 'tommarro' to 'tomorrow'. I hope you don't mind me pointing that out.

[HolyAngelicGrace]

your spelt let wrong