Unbreakable Love

• Artist: _ Lemony Strudel _
• Description: This is a sonnet I had to write as a freshman. Once again inspired by the love of my life.
• Date: 08/24/2008
• Tags: love

Staying up late,
Thinking of you.
Us meeting was like fate,
And from there it grew.
I need you with me,
Like the sun needs the moon.
You fill me with a joyous melody,
Making me hum a silly tune.
You’re always in my heart,
And you haunt me in my dreams.
I can’t stand to be apart,
For your smile makes the dull seem to gleam.
I hope you know by now my feelings are true,
I hope you know by now that I love you.

Comments

[lovealwaysadri]

Very cute, only thing I have against it is the part when you said "And you haunt me in my dreams." It seems to me as if haunt gives off a negative connotation. But all in all, it's really good. (: 5/5