the sun

• Artist: lord halford 3 3 3
• Description: a poem i made in year 4 (cofton school) the teacher thought it was so good i had to read it to year 5 and 6,i thought it was rubbish.me was 8... still remember never forget
• Date: 08/29/2008
• Tags: dragonclawssun

the sun is a dragon that crawls across the earth on it's never ending journey with it's iluminating claws of life.

Comments

[lord halford 3 3 3]

8 yrs old

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

I want to give this a 1/5. For obvious reasons... I shall refrain, because most people cannot take any form of negativity towards their "masterpieces". so...1.5/5.