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Eyes the color of a full moon's sky
Hair as dark as a moonless night
Strong enough to hold me, careful not to break me
Voice as hypnotic as a thousand harps
Has my heart in his hands and his voice on my mind
- by Rose Mason |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/12/2008 |
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- Title: Martin My Lover
- Artist: Rose Mason
- Description: This is a poem I made to express my feelings for Martin in the real world; not gaia martin, real life 3d Martin. But anyway I just made it on a PM and I thought it would be awesome to show you all.
- Date: 09/12/2008
- Tags: martin lover
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Comments (2 Comments)
- panther-rage - 09/12/2008
- Hi Rose, thank you for your kind comment for my Forbidden Love poem, and for the invitation to review "Martin." The first line of the poem is really good imagery, as is the rest of the poem. The only line that needs work IMO is #2. The last line of the poem shows how much he consumes you. You could add one more line to the end on this theme.
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- II Fantom 420k II - 09/12/2008
- very well written and thought out as to what goes in it. and a very romantic poem....
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