I Have Words To

• Artist: La Chibet
• Description: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/non-fiction/vote/?entry_id=100043555 please read this it will answer why i didn't use spell check okay. So please understand i don't want to change any one i just want them to keep this in mind. I never wanted my poem to be trashed and flamed so much i wanted the people who couldn't spell like me to be inspired and out stretch there wings. I'm sorry if that was so wrong.
• Date: 09/12/2008
• Tags: have words

((though it killed me i corrected it with the Franklin okay so shut up. But because the first one has power to it i left it up her at the bottom so be quite already people. You wimpy baby's got what you wanted. The boring rules that the world has placed.))

Corrected one -.- :

I may not spell that well but i have words two. Just because there not spelled exactly the way yours do. Don't mean they don't got a lesson of there own. I made a form of art and if it has imperfections that what makes it a masterpiece. It's like Picasso and his ways no one could mimic or capture them. Because they where different people criticized and rejected them. So shut up read and open your hear to what i have to say. Because I've got words two and i want to say them to you. Each one got a meaning of there own i wrote them because i want you to know. That the meaning is true soul is there and i got my wages to fair. Like every one sitting in there shells hiding the inside away from the out. We all got hearts and we all got souls though they ant the same don't me they ant there. Its like the meaning its not the same as yours my words are different but its there it holds value. And if my words where different or spelled right it wouldn't be the same it wouldn't be mine. Because i got words to i wrote them i put them in the sentence there in. You didn't do that but i did there my words and sentences. So before you laugh before you comment on my words the same words I'm saying now. The same words that make the art work you see before you. The same words that give it life. The same words. the same words i use to talk with. You gonna take them away you gonna shot them down you gonna leave me broken. You gonna tell me i cant make my words any more. But its like Hitlar killing the Jews because they where what they where. These words are me and taking them away would be like him. Telling me i need to fix them ant the problem its you not me so what there not spelled wright. But who made the rules any ways? Who ever they are I'm braking them now and forever. But unless you take my words away i cant be a artist. And you? you wont be some one who helped you will be some one who saw a problem and killed me for it. My words are strong but it takes a true person to read my art and my words and appreciate them. Unlike you sucker who say its good except for the spelling. You missed it you missed the whole thing. The boat has left and you where asleep with your ticket at your bed side. My art is everything i wright and how i wrote it if you read it then it doesn't need to be fixed. See it takes a true dyslexic artist to read this and see someone like them making a stand for who they are. See my work is for the ones who don't spell right the ones who think differently the ones who know what its like to be me. If you cant except it then don't read it. Maybe your not good enough for them anyways. That's right i said it to all the losers who think they need to change. Because you got to be smart when you read my words. My words are who i am so if they need to change your telling me i need to change who i am. And that makes you look bad don't it? So shut up and read because i got words to and i didn't just wright them for you.


The original one ^^= :
I may not spell that well but i have words two. Just because there not spelled exactly the way yours do. Dont mean they dont got a lesson of there own. I made a form of art and if it has improfections thats what makes it a masterpice. Its like pacaso and his ways no one could mimic or capture them. Because they where diffrent people cridicised and rejected them. So shut up read and open your hear to what i have to say. Because i'v got words two and i want to say them to you. Each one got a meaning of there own i wrote them because i want you to know. That the meaning is true soule is there and i got my wages to fair. Like every one sitting in there shells hidding the inside away from the out. We all got hearts and we all got souls though they ant the same dont me thay ant there. Its like the meaning its not the same as yours my words are diffrent but its there it holds value. And if my words where diffrent or spelled right it wouldent be the same it wouldent be mine. Because i got words to i wrote them i put them in the scentance there in. You didnt do that but i did there my words and scenteces. So before you laugh before you comment on my words the same words im saying now. The same words that make the art work you see befor you. The same words that give it life. The same words. the same words i use to talk with. You gunna take them away you gunna shot them down you gunna leave me broken. You guna tell me i cant make my words any more. But its like hitlare killing the jews because they where what they where. These words are me and taking them away would be like him. Telling me i need to fix them ant the problem its you not me so what there not spelled wright. But who made the rules any ways? Who ever they are im braking them now and forever. But unless you take my words away i cant be a artist. And you? you wont be some one who helped you will be some one who saw a problem and killed me for it. My words are strong but it takes a ture person to read my art and my words and apreciate them. Unlike you sucker who say its good ecept for the spelling. You missed it you missed the whole thing. The bote has left and you where asleep with your tickt at your bed side. My art is everythign i wright and how i wrote it if you read it then it dosent need to be fixed. See it takes a true dislexic artist to read this and see someone like them makign a stand for who they are. See my work is for the ones who dont spell right the ones who think diffrently the ones who know what its like to be me. If you cant except it then dont read it. Maybe your not good enough for them anyways. Thats right i said it to all the lozers who think they need to change. Because you got to be smart when you read my words. My words are who i am so if they need to change your telling me i need to chang who i am. And that makes you look bad dont it? So shut up and read because i got words to and i didnt just wright them for you.

Comments

[Mutandanstan]

try spell check and put this in the right section or put it into poetry form

[Detective Plot Point]

Wow, that's really pretty bad. Try using a spell check, next time.

[ScytheWielder]

Since when did this kind of liberal, luke warm, complacency become okay?

[fizznomore]

Matey, presenting your work to the best of your ability - i.e. spell-checking - is just respectful to your readers. That's all these critics are trying to get across. If we take the time to read, we hope you've taken the time to proofread. It's important to learn the rules of the language you're working in; then, you can break them.