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As you look up into the sky
You start to wonder why
Something so simple yet unique
Could look so fragile and weak
They come in different sizes and shapes
Some that look like birds and apes
Yet it seems it would make noises so loud
But they are just simple clouds
- by Cynical_Souls |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/12/2008 |
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- Title: Clouds
- Artist: Cynical_Souls
- Description: I got this idea just from looking out my window. It just came to me.
- Date: 09/12/2008
- Tags: clouds
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- bbydaeriel93 - 09/12/2008
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...could look so fragile and (add "so" wink weak
..seems "it"? I thought the subject was plural.
The last line is a little short. And overall, I'm not quite sure what you're talking about. It's good though; the rhyme scheme is promising - Report As Spam
- XxMystic_SorrowxX - 09/12/2008
- yay! 1st comment!
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