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Like the first snowfall,
Her beauty silences you-
Her coldness destroys.
Like a wilting rose
In delicate condition,
She fades gracefully.
Like the universe,
She is unfathomable-
Never understood.
- by kyttie_kurai |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/26/2008 |
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- Title: Woman
- Artist: kyttie_kurai
- Description: This is my first attempt at a haiku. Its not the best, and contructive criticism is more than welcome. Please tell me what you think.
- Date: 09/26/2008
- Tags: woman
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- Ayumi_Cherry - 12/26/2008
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Love it =]]
plz tell me what you think of mine too.
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- Hacked By Blank - 09/26/2008
- Ahhh... reminds me of my gf ^_^ me likey
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