She cries inside

• Artist: Amu_Ikuto_4ever
• Description:
• Date: 10/06/2008
• Tags: cries inside

She cries inside
Never lets him know
The pain he’s caused
In her soul
She loved him so
But he never loved her
He used her
Than when she wouldn’t give in
He found someone new
When she sees
Them together
It breaks her heart
But she loves to see him happy
Though it causes her pain
She cries inside
Not even her friends
Can see all the pain
Though they see her eyes
Her eyes are empty inside
She longed to be with him
But he never saw her
As more than another toy
To mess with her emotions
Oh how she longed to be
With him
But she can’t go
Though the pain
So she cries & waits

Comments

[TheWhiteApocalypse]

i really like this, even though yes it is somewhat "basic" but it is really good, it has a lot of feeling and emotion in it

[DarkTimesInHeaven]

too basic.
let your imagination run wild.
the crazier it sounds,
the more interesting your writing will be.