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By:Amy
I'm all alone in a dark corner,
Then you came along.
I felt like I was on a clift at the border,
And then you told me to be free and sing a song.
You took over my heart with your sweetness,
And you were always so kind.
You tell me that you love me and my heart fills up with so much brightness,
That you're always in my mind.
When ever I talk to you my heart pounds with intensity.
I feel like I'm gonna die.
In my mind I build my own City.
I always hope you never say good-bye. heart
- Title: The Love story
- Artist: skyprins
- Description: Just a love poem I wrote for someone special...
- Date: 10/10/2008
- Tags: love story
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Comments (4 Comments)
- FantasyAura - 11/29/2009
- It feels like all the words are thrown together. Sorry but this isn't what you call poetry
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- hinata hyuga fan-me - 01/01/2009
- umm, i dont really know what 2 say. i wasnt really feeling the city part unless u sed sumtin like... "where we are the only two people" or sumtin lovey dovey like that *shruggs* o well
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- YY_Super_Saiyan - 10/10/2008
- sweet words sed even sweeter. say this 2 nutz from me and ill owe u one and gl
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- Toastbusters - 10/10/2008
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Yikes.
This is a mess. - Report As Spam
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