Nothing

• Artist: puhlayed
• Description: I wrote this not that long after my cousin was killed. He got hit by a car at the age of 8.. sadly he didnt it make it to the hospital... and i wrote this because i got no comfort and stuff and yeah..i started getting cold-hearted and just that "nothing" feeling but it comes and goes so chyea..Oh and thx for the corrections and stuff =] i really suck when it comes to picking "there" or "their" lol
• Date: 10/14/2008
• Tags: nothing

there's times when i don't love you,
there's times when i don't care,
there's times when i don't need you,
it's like your never there.

There's times when i don't feel,
this sorrow or this pain,
There's times when i feel all alone,
no world or warm embrace.


There's times when I'll just sit their,
just starring into space,
no experssion to be seen,
not a smile to be placed.

What you see is just a stage,
Different and in-spell,
what i feel is nothing,
feeling nothing hurts like hell.

Comments

[SquidIt]

Wow... that's sad...
Damn.. there's a mistake on the fourth line (sorry, mistakes are magnets for my eyes), but overall it's pretty awesome

[Queen Hexagon]

oh no...im so sorry i am.. i know what its like to lose someone especially when it wasnt their time... hey you kept spelling their... its supposed to be "there" just a little grammar for u ^^ sorry i dont mean to be so forward.... i wrote a poem too will u look at it? its called "Hope"

[Heemo_Emo]

great poem!keep it up!