My Demon Side

• Artist: caestra south
• Description: i poem of my hatred
• Date: 10/27/2008
• Tags: demon

i hate certain people but i don't show it . i have anger inside me but i hide it . i sometimes want to kill that person but i don't , it some demon forming inside me making me feel so angry and full of hate , i hate it but i can't get rid of it

Comments

[KenshinRyuzaki]

I think if you add a little more, you will be able to grab somebody's attention. A little more detail and maybe some metaphors to really get someone to think would work?

[caestra south]

thanks sis ( vampirefayt25) it describes my feelings at school

[vampireFayt25]

Wow! That's different from your other things you've written sis.

[Mayerling Waltz]

Teen angst at its finest.