"Shoot Me Down"

• Artist: ChrissyBabee32114
• Description: Heyy...In my school we have electives. In my elective, I wrote this. Thankyou For Reading, and Please Give Some FeedBack...
• Date: 10/27/2008
• Tags: shoot down chrissy love life

"Shoot Me Down"

Shoot Me Down, But I still Stand, I Hold Onto Life, Hand In Hand, Shoot Me Down, But I don't Care, You Do Not Make Me Scared, Shoot Me Down, Like You Don't Care, But I Know You Do, When I see You Standing There, Shoot Me Down, I'll Close My Eyes, Picture All The Lies, I've Heard In My Life, Shoot Me Down, It's No Superise, I'm Not Like Them, You'll Hear No Cries, Shoot Me Down, I know You Will, That's Only Because Inside, You Kill, Your Heart Aches, Your Head Spins, In My World, No one Wins, Stand Up Straight, Don't Bend Down, Shoot Me Down, But I remain On The Ground. -Chrissy Hope You Like. ♥

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Comments

[xX StRawBeRrY StAinS Xx]

nice ^-^ it was great! tho i would recommend some spacing in it like for each line so that it would be easier to read instead of paragraph format.

[xX_II-Aaron-II_Xx]

wow that was good and that was ur first entry 5/5

[ChrissyBabee32114]

So many comments so fast! Im so happy tysm!

[allisun1]

Beginer? [chuckle] LOVED IT!!!

[ChrissyBabee32114]

Thankyou Guyz...It really means alot to me... Chek out my other one... Make it through your lies...It's cornyy.

[VivaLaaaVivian]

really good poem chrissy! ur gonna b famous! =]

[nocan11]

[claps]nice job very even flow i liked it a lot