Always Together

• Artist: Rizzle-Me-This
• Description: Just the typical tale of a maiden who had lost her love in battle. It was just for fun, and written at the spur of the moment all because the first four lines popped into my head and I thought I could run with it.
• Date: 10/30/2008
• Tags: always together

The maiden lies still
Her heart suspended.
Despite her wishes
The night hasn’t ended.

She looks to the stars
That hang far above
And whispers her name
Of her departed true love.

She reaches out,
Her pale hand high,
Fingers stretched,
A downcast sigh.

She lowers her eyes
And lets her tears fall.
Never again will she hear
Her mate's loving call.

Her knight had lost
And will never be found,
For now he is hidden
Far beneath the ground.

Then…

Floating before her
Is but a single feather,
A note attached
Reading “Always together.”

She lifts her eyes
And stares ahead.
And there’s her love
Standing near her bed.

Her eyes open wide
At the phantom in sight.
He wipes away a tear
And becomes engulfed in light.

He waves his last goodbye
And slowly disappears,
Leaving her with nothing
But a lone feather and her tears.

She holds the feather close
Once again closing her eyes
And with her love in mind
She slowly, quietly dies.

Her body vanishes,
Leaving the angel’s feather,
The note's words forever stating,
“Always together.”

Comments

[ShySnowWhiteAnon]

And whispers her name
Of her departed true love.

I think you meant:
And whispers the name
Of her departed true love.
Anyway, its really beautiful and definitely a 5/5

[2_Liz_24_Heart_4]

aw i luv it it's really good it's sad but it's poetic and inspiring awesome job!! ^_^ 5/5

[Jonathan robert]

Man that's some good stuff you just keep on writing i'l be waiting for more! ^^

[TitaniumHeartz]

omg its so sweet ^^ but depressing :l but sweet too xD

[Bubblegum Bishonen]

I love it! Should b a clip or something too, like great rhymning thats how I usually write poems