The LOVE You STOLE

• Artist: Immortal Cynicism
• Description: Basially my English class had to write poetry then present it to the class. FYI I hate, Hate HATE! presentation. My theme was the love that can be lost or stolen from you. This is the poem I wrote. XD
• Date: 10/30/2008
• Tags: love stole goldenstate

Tears streaked my face,
Fell to the floor.
I watched him silently,
Walk out the front door.

I didn't know why,
I couldn't believe...
What that guy had,
Just done to me.

He said life was great,
"Everything's good."
Then he left me...
I felt like a fool.

It was already to late,
Damage was done.
During our last battle,
He had won.

I gave him my heart!
Nothing in return!
Our flame has run out,
And there's nothing to burn.

Now I am here,
Crying alone.
But deep down I'm glad,
I'm now on my own.

Comments

[Immortal Cynicism]

Thanks guys for the comments. XD And I"ll read your poems Overlord. ^^ I"m not really a poet but I can attempt to write more if people like them.

[UNKNOW dude ii]

wow dis is awesome =D i luv it,
if u have tym u shood check out sum of my poems sumtym =)

[the seductive voices]

aww your really good!
this sorta makes up of how I feel right now.

[rich milk chocolate]

this poem that you wrote is deep and i really like it. i hope i can read more of your poems. u r a very good poet

[xXCuddlie_Yet_ViciousXx]

i really love this poem...it's very emotional and i can relate to the message. the colours emphasize the words well.