Not Fake

• Artist: tksunshine93
• Description: I am just sick and tired of everyone looking down at me and others who also hurt
  sick and tired of those who think that we do what we do and feel what we feel because we want the attention
  well here's to them!!!
• Date: 11/02/2008
• Tags: fake

Can't stop this pain
My god
I'm cut
Can't stop bleeding
I'm falling to my knees
Someone please help me
I'm coughing up blood
While I'm gasping and kneeling
Oh my god what's happening
I can't see
Every thing's going dark
I'm losing feeling
Someone please
Make it stop
I don't know what it's like
But I think I'm dying
I beg of you help
I'm not doing this for attention
Not doing this to be seen
The hurt and blood I'm not faking
I can't do this on my own
My god
It's too late
I feel myself fading

Comments

[Blue River Sprite]

Astounding, simply astounding!
This really come from inside. That's what I love about your poems, they're so real.
Anyone can write a few rhyming lines but you write about true emotions, you make it all so real.

[c l e r ii x3]

i really like the message of this poem you made!

[-XthedragonseyesX-]

i completely, well i guess i can't say that entirely, but i kinda understand-stay strong-the emotion is clear-i find it honest and i reciprocate its vibe-Amazing

[BannedAccount00300028096]

wooh....i know how u feel and im just saying this now.......its true and no one should ever be looked down upon.