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I MISS YOU,
LIFE HOLDS NO TOMARROWS UNLESS IM WITH YOU EVERYDAY.
I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU! exclaim
YOU ARE MY LIFE,I WOULD DIE WITHOUT YOU,
IS THAT A HINT?
I LOVE YOU!
- by blondie0414 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/02/2008 |
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- Title: I MISS YOU
- Artist: blondie0414
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Description:
THIS WAS FOR MY BOUFRIEND DYLAN. AND EDWARD I LOVE HIM - Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: miss
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Comments (3 Comments)
- RedWhiteBlack - 11/08/2008
- HEY DOES WRITING IN CAPSLOCK MAKE MY WRITING BETTER?
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- Haseo Hyuuga - 11/02/2008
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spelling:-2 stars - caps lock:-1 star - emotes:-1 star
OVERALL: 1 star
Very poor, not a poem really. I hate all caps, and spelling isn't that great. Unfortunatly you topped it off with an emote so I'm giving you a 1. - Report As Spam
- cutypiegirliscool - 11/02/2008
- good job.
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