Me

• Artist: Devil_of_Dawn
• Description: 11/09/08
  I kind of just made it up after reading a couple other poem and lyric entries I wanted to make one myself. I thought it was good so I went with it. Mostly explains itself. It's about taking a choice to attempt something or not to and whether or not your afraid of reaching higher or afraid of yourself.
  Oh and I prefer no suggestions, but if you have topic ideas or an idea I can use I don't mind then.
• Date: 11/08/2008
• Tags: afraid fear life choice

I'm not the one who took a fall
I'm not the one trying to learn to crawl
I'm not the one standing tall
I'm not the one who reached it all

Because I was afraid to fall
In return I missed it all
If I took the chance to stand for me
I would know what I could truly be

Now I fear to fall
But I've learned it's ok to take it slow or crawl
I can stand tall
And reach it all
So long I'm me
What I can truly be.

Peaceful, Intelligent, Lively, Lovely.

Me

Comments

[Devil_of_Dawn]

I was trying to use the first ad second verse to create an obvious change in the third verse so that you can see a quick growth in how that character was. Thank you for your comment though! ^-^

[gogopinkranger]

you rhymed "fall" with "tall" and "all" far too often, so it sounds repetitive. otherwise good :>