Way of Dusk and Dawn

• Artist: Azrael_The_Death_Angel
• Description: Just something I thought of, it had been going through my head for a couple of days, so I decided to write it down
  
  hope you like it ^_^
• Date: 11/17/2008
• Tags: dusk dawn

When you are thrown
to the brink of fear
don't be afraid
the dawn's almost here
It's darkest before dawn
just do not forget
light's on its way
no time for regret
From dawn to dusk
and everywhere between
oath's have been made
waiting to be seen
A promise to be kept
amidst all the dischord
is pressed to oblivion
or found on the ship's boards
A radiant vessel
and nothing more
can guide you away
on towards the door!
Beyond that gate
exists a great field
and there in the center
lies a key to wield
Now this speical key
it is like no other
'tis not to any door
nor chest moreover
The key is a portal
that leads to the heart
inside is a vision
of those not to part
A map to a castle
suspended on air
inside lies a secret
now hurry up there!
Climb up the stairway
up to the top
keep up your pace
and don't ever stop!
Now enter the chamber
like the gateway to Hell
inside is a trapdoor
down which you once fell
Confront now the Guardian
that once stood in your way
destroy now his body
and his soul will not stay
Make your way
out of the room
the air is filled
with impending doom
Draw your blade
now's your chance
to gain revenge
with the king's dead glance
A whistle, a cry
and there lies the king
no longer of the living
from your blades' sting
Down to the dungeon
with the dead king's key
open the cell-door
let your heart fill with glee
Now flee the castle
companion at hand
flee the dread castle
soon claimed by the land
Alas, that foul king
has risen again
back now to haunt you
until you are slain
Now banish his spirit
back to the ground
his soul will vanish
never again to be found
Your quest's now completed
so make your way home
rejoice in the fact
that you aren't alone
The nation is cheering
at the tyrant's defeat
the battle is over
so go now to sleep
Drift through your dreamland
no longer should you weep
the light has prevailed
so sleep warrior, sleep

Comments

[Chiyo Amano]

this is amazing. you have some real talent.

[calkht]

don't tell anybody this...
although i'm telling everybody who reads the comments =="
i was too lazy to read all the poem.
but by seeing how much u wrote and the first few lines. it's pretty good.
but i'll have to give you 4/5 stars... because i also judge on looks. ^^

[darkangel9194]

Um I didn't really understand it at all.....