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The sin of the flame
Tickles the angels wings
And he speaks to himself
“I want to die.”
His heart is broken,
His love unspoken.
Why dose he refuse to fly?
The spiral in which
He fell downward
Has reached and end
And what’s left of his sanity
Begins to bend.
He thinks that
He’s a shame.
As he places blame on himself.
This angel’s name
I dare not speak,
He was held close to my heart
That he gently tore apart
As feather after feather
On his lovely wings were set aflame.
Why dose he refuse to fly?
Instead he whispers to no one
But the flame,
“Please hurry, I want to die!”
His wings now ablaze
And his body blackening
As blood drips from his wrists and arms
Falling to the flame of transgression
He burns, wings and all
In the small shed
That is no longer.
Wings to ashes,
And soul to afar.
Deep in the woods,
In the shed that’s no more
The angel’s cries have died
What a shame,
So young,
The angel fell
To burn in hell.
The bloody scars,
The cries,
The thoughts
That did not subside.
His wings, once beautiful
Burnt and broken
Along with bent sanity
And love he had ruined
His wings no longer shine,
And he now,
CAN NEVER FLY.
- by L3thal Ch3micalz |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/17/2008 |
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- Title: Wings To Ashes
- Artist: L3thal Ch3micalz
- Description: this poem is about my best friend, he committed suicide not long ago. i remember i always thought about how perfect he was, i called him my angel because whenever i needed him he was there. he set small shed in the woods on fire and burned and bled to death. now all thats left the memory's of past, that i wish would go away.
- Date: 11/17/2008
- Tags: wings ashes
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kris-krisy - 11/20/2008
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this poem is so heatbreaking!!
i'm sorry about your friend.
i send my best wishes and compliments of this poem.
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- UNKNOW dude ii - 11/20/2008
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dis is awesome =D
u shood check out one of mine and tell meh what u think =) (u don't have 2) ^_^ - Report As Spam
- artemis_flora - 11/19/2008
- My brother just committed suicide a week ago............. he left a note saying how he is afraid of the future and he wants to be with God before its to late and all that stuff. He was my angel to and I share your pain. I just can't belive he's gone.... how long ago did this happen? If it was very recent I can help you through the pain and if you want.
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- Fairest93 - 11/19/2008
- That is really sad i cried this poem deservis to bo number one in the spotlight! i have never read anything so deep
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- kerima1510 - 11/19/2008
- I had a friend that just recently died, killed in a car accident. He was like family, we were in the marching band together. I had trouble coping with it, so I wrote a poem as well. Poetry just helps get emotions out. I took the poem to my creative writing class and told his story after reading it to my class. I felt a lot better after that. So sharing it helps. I'll have my poem posted soon if you would like to read it.
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- Dreams Wishes Nightmares - 11/19/2008
- Omg! Im soo sorry for you and your friend!
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