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the way she looks at me makes me want to my lips on her, heart
when she is in my arms i want to keep her their forever.
her eyes tinkle in tthe light like a anime chick about to get kissed,
if i was the universe she would the stars.
without her i wont be alive,
i would be dark matter lost in translation.
- by werepire400 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/20/2008 |
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- Title: her touch
- Artist: werepire400
- Description: its about how i feel about my girlfriend. she is on gaia. vampireprincessvermillion
- Date: 11/20/2008
- Tags: touch
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Comments (7 Comments)
- maydaymouse - 06/04/2010
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It's sweet, and a little humurous as others have said. You have some spelling and grammar errors that you should fix though, then it would be even better. So a 4/5. Keep writing.
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- 4ever_lost in_ ur eyes - 07/22/2009
- nice
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- charcoalrose2112 - 06/02/2009
- This is so sweet, i know how u feel. Or at least i know how she does lol. Very heartfelt ^_^
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- Dr.VonFrie - 06/02/2009
- wow lol thats more humorous then deep
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- The mad and the furious - 12/15/2008
- whoa, thats deep
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- x_SmitSmit_x - 11/25/2008
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aww tht is so sweet
i wuv it <(^_^)>
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- VampirePrincessVermillion - 11/20/2008
- I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
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