Running Thin

• Artist: Doomed Sex
• Description: Getting my poetry or whatever you want to call it out there. I wrote this today (11/20/08) and wasn't planning on posting it but since I recently found out I have a fan that loves my poetry, I wanted to post this. So here you go Angela2881.
• Date: 11/20/2008
• Tags: running thin

Baby girl I want you by my side,
Forever I want you it's no lie,
Me and you,
Lets make this true,
Your the world to me,
Through what we do,
Just open up your eyes and see,
That you with me,
Is the way to be,
And there's no other way,
Please take me back,
I can't wait another day,
I want you in my arms,
So I can protect you from harm,
I know I've caused you pain,
And that's hard to turn away from,
But I'm trying to change,
And give you want you need and then some,
Just understand that it takes time,
But one day baby,
We'll cross that finish line,
We're almost done,
And times running out,
Let me show you what love is all about...

Comments

[Ubiquitous Androgyny]

this was one of ur poems i enjoyed reading becuase the rest are all like "i dont want you any more", "i dont want u back"
and all of a sudden "please take me back" appears...sorta made me laugh ^^

[xxxlovemeforeverxxx]

nice

[iiLil_emo_PuppeTii]

i like this one. it rhymes and it totally makes sense! i lvoe your writing im going to become a fan of your poetry. check mine out!?