Who am I?

• Artist: venom fang87
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• Date: 11/24/2008
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Who am I?
I am all that you see,
I am all you judge me as.
You don’t see what’s in my heart,
You don’t listen to what is in my soul.
I am what you think I am.
You judge me and never think twice,
You never think I am anyone worth your time,
You want me to be a shadow, something to look over.
I am someone you push around, some one you need to hate.
That’s all I am.
I am an outlet for your suffering,
I am some one you need to hurt, to end your pain.
Who am I?
I am what you fear to be,
I am all and I am none
Who am I?
I am what you call a plague,
You treat me with spite,
You want to cut away my infection,
When I have nothing to hurt.
You see me as trouble,
When I only want peace.
Who am I?
I am some one with no name.
Who I am?
Why should I ask, when you don’t even know who you are?

Comments

[Agrikar the Hidden]

Shows you don't always need to rhyme to make a flowing poem. I liked it, because though it is extremely negative in content you get the feeling that the writer is taking it in stride and rising upwards, though he says he is 'someone you push around, someone you need to hate." So it's pretty cool.

[Hentai-kamisama]

Kinda unoriginal... but obviously very heartfelt... unless you copied someone else's work and I'm too stupid to figure it out...
5.

[SchaiLain]

damn!! your good!! you put so much feeling in your work im impressed.
its like something i wrote but its not on gaia. srry i just never come across work that has a deep connection with my feelings...Bravo! keep up the good work!!