coldness of my heart

• Artist: iiChompii
• Description: well i just wrote it today in my journal
  i was thinking about an immortal who's been around for awhile,
  and doesn't bother with human feelings. this immortal has a human that won't leave him/her alone...the human love's him/her.....>.< the picture is kinda how i think he should look
  so i guess he should be a guy i don't know give me some feedback
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: coldness heart

you say you love me
i say never
you say to me please let me in
i say i rather die
you say love is beautiful
i say hate is my only salvation
you say you will never leave me alone
still my eyes are blind from your love
here you are crying, sadden by your broken heart
yet i laugh at your weakness
........
still you stay with me? still you take in my hurtful ways ?
you say till death and yonder
even at your last breath....you still love me?
pitiful

Comments

[xox_Cherry_Babe_xox]

Thats heaps gd its like powerful and I love it

[badluck-sofia]

scary thought. thats how i used to be with my boyfriend. before we went out, i used to hate him. and yet he stil wouldnt leave me alone. wow

[Keniqua]

wow.powerful...i like it

[big-dgl]

=O
thats exactly how i feel
=]


99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999/5
xD

[Drathir Chath]

wow that's pretty damn good. I like it!

[BeaniesFTW]

whoah...that was pretty sad.

still a good poem. would be better with rhyme and stuff, but still good.