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I'm strayed and lonely
I'm in a distant sea
I try to find the darkness
But its surrounding me
I run away from fear
I think that I am scared
but I have to face the truth
So it can be me and you
I heard a voice in the distance
I thought in that instance
that it was just and echo
but the noise seems to grow and grow
then you face has shown
My courage is grown
and now I know i am not alone
Sincerely, lost....
D_T16
- by Dark_Tears16 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: Lost....
- Artist: Dark_Tears16
- Description: well, on that one day i was lost at the mall with my parents... and for some reason they didn't care.... so yea, xD
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: hope
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Comments (2 Comments)
- keysh735 - 05/18/2009
- wow thats a really cool poem
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- pretty_face4life - 11/27/2008
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It is good, but I don't know whether you wanted to be lost or not. lol.
'I try to find the darkness
But its surrounding me' - were you looking for an escape from "darkness", or did you want it to overwhelm you? Idk, but keep writing in malls and such.lol - Report As Spam