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THE WORLD
I shall fight for life.
I may die many times but I shall not give in till the end.
So walk with me to the world and help me complete my goal.
Walk with me to the end of dawn into dusk and twlight.
May the chosen one come around to us and help us do.
When we first step into this world we waited for thee to come and guide us though to the light and find peace and love then hate and death.
So walk with me to the light.
Peace and love to guide us through the world
- by Aldridge Kite |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: The World
- Artist: Aldridge Kite
- Description: Here is my poem i wrote for The world
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: world
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Comments (5 Comments)
- emmywinner56 - 06/19/2009
- this is something special.I feel like it would be bad, but there's something about it that makes it...fantasic. There's a feeling about this that makes it completely unique. I say this a lot, but it's amazing.
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- Aldridge Kite - 12/01/2008
- Well you can say that
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- RockenRollTurtle - 11/28/2008
- Very nice. Not many people can freewrite and make it sound good like this. 5/5
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- smm61 - 11/28/2008
- I agree i like the first three lines
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- pretty_face4life - 11/27/2008
- It sounds like you're talking about God. Right? I don't really get it, but I like it. The first three lines I can really relate to. Keep it up!
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