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Purity once had a name,
And beauty once had a face.
Life once had a meaning,
And once I was safe.
Once there was freedom,
And once I could laugh.
Happiness once was alive,
And once I had another half.
Once I shared her love,
Once I was by her side,
Once I felt I fitted,
So quickly that died.
Her grace so great,
Her beauty so vast,
All I ever wanted,
Was for it to last.
Fate maybe had another plan,
Or maybe she had another love,
But it all fell apart,
The hand too big for the glove.
Now it's all died away,
Happiness, joy, love; all memories.
Now I walk alone in this dark, dark world,
With no light to guide my way.
- by Moonlitwalker |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: Lost Love
- Artist: Moonlitwalker
- Description: My girlfriend broke up with me a while back.. i wrote a poem about how it feels now..
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: lost love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- changeusernamepls - 12/23/2008
- wow that is so sad
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- Lady Calipso - 12/03/2008
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i feel the same...
i don't think i sould hav broken up with him...
anyway, great1 5/5 - Report As Spam
- pvtfoshisl - 12/02/2008
- I got dumped as well. I felt EXACTLY THE SAME, well maybe with some more suicidal thoughts, but that's the basic jdst of it. How come when a guy loves a girl we always get screwed over and love them more than they love us? It's just not fair......the only cure for a broken heart is to find someone, she won't be exactly as good, so I'm not saying she will. But there's a someone that can make you happy again. She MAY even be better......
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- Golden Sarah-Belle - 12/02/2008
- thats so sad!! i really like it, but its SO sad! i've never gone through a break-up that bad, but i sure would feel the same way if me and my current boyfriend broke up. 5/5
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- sarah5392 - 12/02/2008
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Aww. I recently broke up with my boyfriend, now i see why he acted the way he did...if it felt like this =/
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- iKeety - 12/01/2008
- awww. i loved it. c:
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- S l E R R A - 12/01/2008
- omg!when i read that i got teary eyed which NEVER happens...its really good!!!you did a amazing job 10/5 >.<
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