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Purity once had a name,
And beauty once had a face.
Life once had a meaning,
And once I was safe.
Once there was freedom,
And once I could laugh.
Happiness once was alive,
And once I had another half.
Once I shared her love,
Once I was by her side,
Once I felt I fitted,
So quickly that died.
Her grace so great,
Her beauty so vast,
All I ever wanted,
Was for it to last.
Fate maybe had another plan,
Or maybe she had another love,
But it all fell apart,
The hand too big for the glove.
Now it's all died away,
Happiness, joy, love; all memories.
Now I walk alone in this dark, dark world,
With no light to guide my way.
- by Moonlitwalker |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: Lost Love
- Artist: Moonlitwalker
- Description: My girlfriend broke up with me a while back.. i wrote a poem about how it feels now..
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: lost love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Shadow 0f Hearts - 12/01/2008
- This poem is great. The details, metaphors, and symbolism really give us, as the readers, an acute insight to how you feel. The rhyme scheme is great, too. It keeps a nice rhythm and is not over-used. You have a lot of talent. I hope you feel better. Keep on writing. 5/5
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- Rook219 - 12/01/2008
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Wow... It's very illustrative on the darkness of missing someone...
I've got to get better -_-' - Report As Spam
- Dreamy Sundrops - 12/01/2008
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Oh D: its so sad.
One time I was sad
because a guy picked another girl o.o
then I made this poem sort of similar to yours only in a different form... Great poem 5/5 ;~; - Report As Spam
- xx_batty 4 you_xx - 12/01/2008
- its very nice..its sad ...i felt like i was walking in darkness b4 when i broke up with my bf..wow
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- OhhShitniz - 12/01/2008
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Very touching. You should pursue a career in writing for sure
5/5 - Report As Spam
- iShattered - 12/01/2008
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Very touching,
I understand how you felt entirely.
Thank you for sharing.
-Lawrence - Report As Spam
- xiixJonesyxiix - 12/01/2008
- Beautiful, 5/5
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