- I am surrounded by total darkness, praying that I don't have a pulse. Because if i did this would be a nightmare come true. Yet hoping I'm not dead. Because if I was all my friends, all my family, gone dissapeared into nothingness. Along with my hopes and dreams. I am surrounded by total darkness, some one, anyone, help me get out of this place.
- by Pink Freudian |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Darkness
- Artist: Pink Freudian
- Description: I was just thinking and it came to me.
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: darkness
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Comments (6 Comments)
- AvatarRoku05 - 12/03/2008
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Pretty good..I like it. I'm just a punctuation nerd xD
How about a 4? - Report As Spam
- Kristmas28 - 12/01/2008
- if i say that it was a good poem will u not hurt me? -puts hands in front of face as shield-
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- PeaceKarmi - 11/30/2008
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well...it was nice. just to let you know, you might want to work on the capitalization stuff.
im very analytical when it comes to this stuff xD - Report As Spam
- Pink Freudian - 11/30/2008
- Shut up and stop scaring the peoples! Bad rice!
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- Yasha Ninja - 11/30/2008
- tht was totally emo!LOL!
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