Ill

• Artist: Alibis of the Heart
• Description: It's about How you feel inside and you just wanted to show it but can't, and you're hoping that someday you will be able to.
• Date: 11/30/2008
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Someone tell me I'm not ok.
Just say to my face that I'm sick.
Tell them all I'm ill,
say to them there is no cure.

If there is a cure, hold it off.
Give me my medication instead;
A dose of tears in front of them all.
Let them see what I've felt.
Show them all I've never been ok.
Tital waves of tears will flow.

Let's all cry.
The tears of the tormentors will flow.
Tears of those who never helped will spill.
Countless tears will flow from us all.
We'll all weep at the site of our lack of concern.

That rejuvination, that cure,
who knows when it will come.
I could be sick for decades,
or maybe just a month.

Right now I stay in a comatic state.
My life's in eveyones hands.
Will they pull the plug or save me?
It's all up to them, but personally?
I'd like my medication now.

Comments

[UC Poika]

A really good poem. Stirred my heart. You missed those who are concerned and don't know how or whether to show you that. Then it would have been perfect, but maybe that's too perfect. Excellent job.

[duir ancient]

Apathetic, morose, and meaningful. This work delighted me, really, since I rarely get the chance to speak my true emotions. A goodly portion of the world believes that I, as a man, must never feel emotion; emotion makes a man a sissy. Bah, rubbish. Good work on the poem!

[DemeaningMeaning]

...you commented on my work, returning the favor!! i really liked this piece...lots of feeling was put into it. i think most of us have felt the way this poem depicts....we can all relate. keep posting beautiful art!!

[Holds Devils Pot of Tea]

This one showed how much pain or suffering your in.I liked it alot.Also it seems that alot of people care about you.You also include,in the best points of the poem,alot of emotion but stability at the same time.Keep it up ^^

[Saturn Midnight]

I like this too. A little fuzzy but it's good. :3

[Pondy Is The Coolest]

You're deep Sandy ^^ This was really great! Do you still feel this way, though? ;(