just friends....

• Artist: XxChibi AlicexX
• Description: this is something that truly happened in real life and it shocked me...
  its sort of a songish poem you can sing to it.
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: love dont love awesome cool

We were friends....
Just friends....
nothing more....
nothing less.....
but that's in my heart...
not in yours.
weve been friends since kindergarten....
just friends...
how couldnt i have seen the love burn in your eyes?
you loved me since 5th grade and u still do... why???
this is what he told me...
"i love u.....
your beautifull....
i would die if you dont love me... i will die for u.....
you are my life you are the one for me and no one else!"
How could i have not seen the love burn in your eye's!
"i dont love u..." i said
"please dont love me.....
i....
am....
not......
YOURS......

Comments

[ElectraShocked]

I agree with MissDantil. Oh and...Capitalize PLEASE!

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[MissxDantil]

I really like the idea of it, and the rhythm is nice. And it's nice to see something other than just a typical "love poem".

However, in order for a LOT of people to take this seriously, you need to drop the text-speak and spell/grammar check this. o: For instance, "your eyes" instead of "eye's" and "you" iinstead of "u".

I don't mean for this to sound mean, I just think it will be twice as good if it looks a little more polished. :]

[BabysMommy]

sounds kinda shallow