can you??

• Artist: Tiggergirl22
• Description: he was an idiot...i was mad...i wrote this poem...
  
  its kindof weird but i like it i havnt done anything like it b4 so pls coment!!
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: fellings heart

can you talk?
without trying to speak?

can you fight?
while being weak?

can you dream?
without being asleep?

can you be turned down?
while trying not to weep?

can you smell your lies?
without having a nose?

can you run away from me?
without any toes?

can you hurt someone?
without being mean?

can you break my heart?
without making a scene?

Comments

[Cynder_Wulf]

Wow. I just came across this and I see its been up for 2 years. Wow...You must have been really upset.
Honestly this is wonderful, I can say no less.
Could you please check some of my poetry too? It can somewhat relate to this.

[CertifiedOtaku593]

Wow, this is really kewl! biggrin

[prettycaity2]

This is Really good <(*_^)>
Could you rate and comment some of my work.
Just search my name .
Plus I give you a 5/5

[FancyMedo]

It is wonderful

[sexiest baby]

so cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Princess Aqua Moon]

wow this is a great poem u did really good

[La Petite Mofette]

You have a few spelling errors, but in general it is a good poem,