Don't I want it, Want it all?

• Artist: Pain-Killer 4 Dead Angels
• Description: It's the last year before high school.All of the sudden. I meet three or more, incredible, genuine ppl.Whom have shown me so much love during the years I've been there.Made me feel like, someone could really love me.And it pisses me off, that I can't have them all.That I want all of them for my own. Forever. Because they love me.And I have never.Felt that love before.Yours to interpret my other feelings.Don't expect to understand. It has a rhythm so follow it. Thanks :]
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: dont want want

I want it, I want it all.
Help me understand. Your point of view.
What is wrong with feeling selfish?
I want to tell the world.
How I feel.
As we kill.
Kill the night.

Pick, Pick one, two, three.
And until I can be sure.
I will stay.
Stay under my rooftop.
That is against.
My palms.
I cannot fit whole here.
Help me understand.

Here I go. Go into motion.
Come, and see. See this
world. This world with me.

Pick. Pick one, two, three.

One.
Non selfish smile.
What is wrong with me?
Non forgetful waves.
I will always wave back.
Hands that never forget.
To wipe away all the sadness.
Walk past by me.
I never heard of them.
Your secrets in your chest.
If only.
If only you'd give me.
The key.
What is wrong with me?
Always the smile, in
when no one can.
I will never forget it.
When my emotions are a wreck,
Never forget.
Ice tea on my neck.

Here I go. Go into motion.
Come, and see. See this
world. This world with me.

Pick. Pick one, two, three.

Two
Slow but steady,
Though I can almost.
Be as sure.
Quiet from the start.
Nothing but a look.
And maybe a chat.
Maybe two.
Hardly, anything but
the one outside, for
what only I could.
See.
Why, if not my
wandering.
imagination.
Have you lightened,
up to me?
Smile is the best.
Only, I can see.
Your eyes shine,
Like I can hear.
Your thoughts.
Small. But not.
On your laugh.
Why, it's my favorite.
Careful with my words.
I know how you scare.
If I could, I'd scream it.
To you.
I'm afraid,
Afraid to have you run away.
Like a maniac,
I'd chase.
Chase after you.
So clean.
Hilarious to my tummy.
So Fresh.
To cool to digest.
But my favorite.
Is those spikes.
Those are the best.

Here I go. Go into motion.
Come, and see. See this
world. This world with me.

Pick. Pick one, two, three.

Three.
Un-selfish.
Vulnerable.
Hidden.
Under your hoodie.
Giving me.
The chance.
To see your face.
Smile on your face.
Graceful eyes.
Soft smile.
I cannot resist.
No not the chance.
To save you.
Because I know.
That you.
Can save me to.


I want it.
I want it all.
Help me understand. Your point of view.
What is wrong with feeling selfish?
I want to tell the world.
How I feel.
Only one time,
to get this right.
They've got my feelings.
I want it all.
I don't want to say goodbye.
Those damn children,
in the sky.

I'll be gone soon.
But I only want.
want more.
I could never tell you,
straight.

that I ever.
Felt this much.
Love before.

Comments

[whitejade13]

Oh dear, B-B-B-BeanCup is very rude. Now, it was a very nice poem in my opinion though i didn't quite understand all of it but it's your poem not mine and i never expect to understand other people's poems but if i do it does make the poem better. But this was really good. 5/5 smile

[Pain-Killer 4 Dead Angels]

In poetry you can do whatever you want, it doesn't need to make sense,
or even have a correct paragraph structure to be a poem.
Periods to make rhythm obviously.
Where the ******** did you learn your s**t?
It wasn't an attempt at sense either-
Idiot.

[B-B-B-BeanCup]

A series. Of sentence. Fragments. Put together to make. An attempt at sense. It doesn't. Work at all. Seriously you. Guys stop doing. This it's annoying. To read and makes me. Hate you a lot.