You want to hear a calling from true love...
There's a voice you can sense
You look but you cannot find it...
But you look the wrong way!
You never look in the right places!
I am the one calling!
Here my wails!
Feel my longing for your love!
We could share each other's.
But you remain blind, and deaf...
That is why I remain just the wind beside you...
- Title: The Wind Beside You
- Artist: RhaurenCasakra
I don't care about punctuation and structure Never really had much practice with it anyway Plus, I like the way I've written it. In this Literature magazine at my school which I help make, they keep the punctuation you put, simply because that ruins YOUR meaning of the piece
So, I can't really complain about the meaning behind this poem, because the person I like is 3 years older than me and I've never even tried to TALK to him XD But it sounded pretty So I hope you all like it
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: wind beside heart darkness love
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