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you were young and innocent,
you didn't know why he left and suddenly came back
but he did.
what once was your favorite dream,
is now your worst nightmare.
you stand before your fathers eyes,
begging him not again,
then he slowly raises his arm and strikes
again.
you're out cold
on the frozen floor.
what just happened?
he's gone, but you know
he'll be back,
and it will all happen again!
- by smexii_nikkysays_RAWR |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: no title
- Artist: smexii_nikkysays_RAWR
- Description: when i was younger(before i was adopted) i was abused, so i wrote about that!
- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: title abuse hate
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Comments (5 Comments)
- mirukara - 07/16/2010
- the story i hate not the poem its really good 5/5
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- HotShot1489 - 11/05/2009
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Oh thats so sad but still a good poem...
please rate my stuff too - Report As Spam
- Vincent_Iscariot_Key - 12/10/2008
- Ow. Nothing more needed to say, but very straight forward. Good imagery.
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- smexii_nikkysays_RAWR - 12/09/2008
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thanx girl!
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- Fox Printz - 12/09/2008
- thats teribble, not the poem part but the story behind it DX i give it 5/5
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