Destiny's Story

• Artist: x_Celestial Deception_x
• Description: It's just a short poem I came up with a while ago, please rate fairly. Thank you.
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: destinys story poem

You deny the fact that you love me more
Than anything you could ever ask for
Show me your feelings and their true colors
Its destiny's story, we're meant to be lovers
Make my heart beat at a break-neck pace
Please just tell me face to face
You and I we'll paint the sea
The way things are supposed to be
So give our love one single chance
And lift me from this nightmarish trance

Comments

[Ludo Kudo]

Your Poems are really good!!!

[f0rever-serenity]

its great 5/5!!!!
lol

[Eatabogon]

very good i like it but it looks like on some parts u took them from other poems or storys cause the paint the sea part ive heard b4^^ but regardless 500/5^^