Proud?

• Artist: Synayo
• Description: So... I was listening to a song where the chorus is 'So Proud, So Proud' and I couldn't get it out of my head at school. Then I started noticing people bragging about things they hadn't done, making fun of other people, acting better than everybody. I hope they read this poem that I wrote as I watched all that. Ill probably re-submit this later cuz its short.
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: proud synayo pride loud

So proud,
You're so loud,
Yet I fly around,
Without a sound,

So strong,
You brag so long,
Yet I find that you do wrong,
And sing this song;

"So weak,
Soon you'll peek,
And you'll find what you're searching for is so meek,
For its only pain you seek,"

So proud,
So loud,
This is all you can take,
You begin to break.

Comments

[greyj.r]

omg! so beautiful... *tears*

[ushey of darkness]

wow its just sad, good spelling, and you rock its just so true
people are proud creatures n.n 5/5 ~

[HarajukuGirl92]

Its really GOOD!