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This heart belongs to no one,
And it’s all because of you.
I haven’t seen love and don’t know what it means,
Probably because it’s new.
You've changed my life in such a way,
I don’t know what to do.
Your heart is like a chunk of ice,
Just like your whole life is too.
Everything in this poem is very, very true,
The reason for this is, because it’s mostly all about you.
- by un3dead3spirit3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: Because of you.
- Artist: un3dead3spirit3
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Description:
I had this one bf who broke my heart, I thought I loved him, then found out that I didn’t really even know what love was and then it was new to me because I found this other guy, but he’s not really in this poem...oh and this poem went together with another one kind of, this one isn’t as good though, the ending sucked. Check out the other one after you rate or comment this one. The 2nd version is called, "This heart belongs to no one".
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: because
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Comments (5 Comments)
- AM-Malice - 01/18/2009
- I think it's good! A lot of people can relate to it!
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- FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY - 12/23/2008
- i like it! its wondrful but mayb work on the way u state some of the words! but other than that i like it a lot!!!!!
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/12/2008
- I found problems with word choice, and it made the poem feel clunky, and disrupted the somewhat smooth feel of the poem. Working on imagery might help, to. 1.75/5.
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- Desmotes - 12/10/2008
- The rhyme scheme is lovely, and it flows very well. The only thing i would change would maybe be the word choice.
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- Charioteer - 12/10/2008
- that's pretty cool. really sad though
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