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I sit her alone as tears well up in my eyes.
As I came to terms and realize
that what I did was wrong
and now I can't say sorry
cause now your long gone
- by JacobxPerri |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: A mistake.
- Artist: JacobxPerri
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Description:
this is a poem I wrote about a mistake I made.
Enjoy... - Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: mistake
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Sariel Nicolai - 12/10/2008
- I think you did good.
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- II Laffeh II - 12/10/2008
- niice..but u should fix it alittle
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- Tsuki Kurai - 12/10/2008
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You seriously need to work on your stuff. the meter is all messed up, i see typos,an it doesnt rhyme all that well. - Report As Spam
- x_iMooMooMilk_x - 12/10/2008
- i really like it alot!
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