thoughts

• Artist: johnlane
• Description: what i am thinking
• Date: 12/11/2008
• Tags: thoughts

i fight this feeling that causes me pain
so much i think that i am in vain
for as i much i fight in never goes away
i just want to let it go out to play
but it will cause me more pain and sadness
if i cant hold on to this madness
this maddness deep in my heart
this maddness that will tear me apart
for what i want and who i am
i will the other me DAM !
it will take control of my friends
it cause me to kill myself in the end
so i right my thoughts to figure it OUT!!
i cant say no more i will pout
about who i am and what i have become
so please do not come
to see me in my beastly form
for now i will be ever torn
away for people so that not hurt
them who i love. this is my last word
love

Comments

[NerdyMiss]

It makes me sad to think of you as...idk the work...suicidal? Or is depressed a better description?

[PaleUnicorn]

the words were very typical.. in poetry people tend to use things like pain and vain all the time... the message was good but if you don't use more unique words and rhyms then people will look at it as amatuer