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Conversations fill the air
to the Brim, but for One sitting
alone, to be buffered on a whim.
On the edge of life, sitting on the
Edge of the World,
making depressing thoughts become
depressing noises and sounds of,
the thoughts of an Outsider.
People all around converge to
form Amebas, while One
sits over yonder in a, Deep Ponder,
thinking awkward and Out of Place
trying as One might to
join the Conversation.
Filled with I Don’t Knows, and
Maybes from rainy days of,
the thoughts of an Outsider.
Life continues to flows by
around the waking Loner,
unannounced and unawares that
Anything is out of place,
in the vastness of their Solitude.
Trudging alone, unneeded, no warmth,
the one listless One continues, on the
Edge in complete
Uniform Silent Slumber of,
the thoughts of an Outsider.
- by Jade Gears |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/11/2008 |
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- Title: The Outsider
- Artist: Jade Gears
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Description:
This particular poem was inspired in my many awkward moment where everyone in my Government class would find a partner except for me. Gets a bit lonely sometimes so I wrote this. Hope you like. ^^ And as for the reference it was so cute I just had to use it! ^_~
~Moriko - Date: 12/11/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- The Berry Lipstick - 09/18/2009
- It's great! I can relate to it in so may ways.
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- xXWolf_KitsuneXx - 03/11/2009
- Hmm.. Interesting... Do you stalk me? Because this relates to me in SOOOOO many ways.... Lol. Awesome job. 5/5
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- star-seeker423 - 01/06/2009
- I liked it! It reminds me of my P.E. class. The picture is adorable!! I like that too.
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- Jade Gears - 12/14/2008
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^^ Thank you miss. My entire class/grade is one I have thought of as
'losers', so that's fits nicely. ^_~ - Report As Spam
- tksunshine93 - 12/14/2008
- The poem is absolutely sad, I occasionally like solitude but one like that is simply unbearable. Oh and the picture is cute and the people in your government class are losers.
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