- As i sit in the pool, I think death is really cool you look in my eyes, you see me start to cry, as i go under i start to wonder is it fright? But now it's to late i see the bright light, Now i cant go back as i think in my head that im really dead. question
- by mscutie_16 |
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- | Submitted on 12/17/2008 |
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- Title: There's no turning back
- Artist: mscutie_16
- Description: A poem that's about no turning back
- Date: 12/17/2008
- Tags: theres turning back
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- SteveNash13rox - 03/02/2009
- 1/5 dig deeper
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- _Roooose_ - 02/20/2009
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Not in a poem form.
EPIC fail....EPIC xDD - Report As Spam
- mscutie_16 - 12/25/2008
- thanks for all the kind comments smile
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- waterlilly111 - 12/19/2008
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hmmmm.......... if u put it this way............
you
should
have
wrote
it
like
this
3nodding
4/5 - Report As Spam
- iBaka Saki - 12/19/2008
- i like it
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- xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx - 12/17/2008
- dude, first of all... its not even in poem form! second, its just plain... well... PLAIN! it has no personal feel to it, and just doesnt have the edge i like... sry 1/5
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- mscutie_16 - 12/17/2008
- Do you like it ???
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