In the light of the twilight

• Artist: October098
• Description: I wrote this myself
• Date: 12/18/2008
• Tags: light twilight

In the light of the twilight
when the world is calm
i feel like im floating
in a world of peace and joy

In the light of the twilight
when the magestic skies are most buitiful
and when the eagles sore
the forrest turns peacful

In the light of the twilight
when the mountains touch the sky
and when the wild horses graze
the world turns buitiful forever

Lay me down in the feild
in the light of the twilight
let my pain go away
let me world be peacful
let me be home

Let me sing
let me be happy
take me away
to happiness

Lay me in that feild of buity
lay me in the light of the twilight
let the peace take me away
let it surround me

Let me be happy
.........................forever

Comments

[October098]

and thank you for telling me my poem is nice other awsome ppl........i appriciat it.....i give you my blessing

[October098]

HEY BBB BEAN CUP!!1MY DADS A LAWYER SO I SUGGEST YOU SHUT THE FOOK UP!!!

[Ms Make Me Smile]

she said in the light of twilight shes pointing out that she already is in the twilight.who cares about spelling errors she got what she was trying to say across so the bad spelling shouldnt matter.i really liked it 5/5

[plether1234321]

dude shut up........stop being so uncool.......by the way maggie its great

[B-B-B-BeanCup]

You know, "twilight" implies that you're in the light already? Unless you're referring to the book glowing, or something. Still, poem shows lack of understanding of the English language and disregard for conventions of grammar and spelling. Yes, "Grammar" is spelled with an A, stop spelling it "Grammer."
FUN FACT: You can download a browser or browser add on that checks your spelling as you type much like microsoft word does? It'll point out and correct your spelling errors as you type!

[Princess Ballet Tutu]

I loved it.. It reminds me of something really nice!! ^^ Thanks for posting it!!

[October098]

well I get horrible grades in grammer